Edit, Edit, Edit

Greetings Friends and Family

Watercolor by Vermont artist Elaine Witten of a view out a Harlem, NY hospital window.
Vermont artist Elaine Witten's oil painting View form the Window (Harlem) shows laundry hanging on a line outside a tenement.

Recently I found a watercolor sketch, View from the Window, that I painted in 1958 while working at a hospital in Harlem. Although I included the sketch in my January newsletter, I am showing it again along with my new completed larger oil version.

Editing, what to delete, what to add, what to change and why, is an important aspect of the creative process for writers, composers, choreographers and all visual artists. Editing is where the important thinking process takes place and is essential to making our best work. My painting process is enhanced when I draw a preliminary pencil sketch to work out the composition and value range, the two most important elements in the hierarchy of painting design. Much of the editing can be done at this stage, facilitating   greater ease during the painting process.

I was inspired to paint View from the Window in oil because it presents many interesting compositional elements. Strong vertical lines of the buildings are juxtaposed with the horizontal energy of the clothes lines with clothes blowing in the breeze and the beautiful rhythm of the zig-zag fire escape. The various levels of the tops of the apartment buildings also supply rhythm for the viewer’s eyes.  This oil is 24’X18”, more than two times the  proportion of the watercolor sketch. This change allowed for more floors to be added to the buildings and a longer fire escape, adding to the verticality of the work. I deleted the lower bottom portion of the original sketch as it interrupted the long vertical lines of the buildings. I also edited out three telephone lines at the top to better showcase interesting negative space between tops of buildings and sky.  Those of you who know my work, realize that creative use of negative space is an important part of my compositional thinking both in my painting and sculpture. I did leave in two T V antennae

in this space, as their T shapes repeat the T shape formed by the lowest balcony and ladder of the fire escape and I like how this repetition enhances the overall composition. I added a tiny shadow figure, head and shoulders, at one window to add a small human element to this architectural scene.

Editing is an important part of every work of art and the learning process of each art form is an on-going, lifelong endeavor.


On a Personal Note

In February I received word that Royal Flush, my bronze pheasant, was awarded First Prize in the 3D division in an International exhibition, Lightspacetime's 11th annual All Women Exhibition. I show it below as it is an example of my use of negative space to enhance a sculpture. The negative spaces allow light to shine through the wings of the bird.

Bronze sculpture of pheasant showing impressive use of negative space

Currently

I have a bronze sculpture The Hunters (Harris Hawk) included in the National Association of Women Artists on-line exhibition “The Paths We Take.”

Workshop

My sculpture workshop at Southern Vt. Arts Center, Manchester, Vt, is scheduled for July 12-15 and sign up is now available on the SVAC website.

Sign up soon and come and create with us. Beginners as well as more advanced students are always welcome. Class is limited to 12 students.

 

May your journey, whatever form it takes, be joyful.

Elaine

6 Comments

    • Thanks so very much, Erin, for your kind words. Painting the scene from my window when I worked at a hospital in Harlem, brought back many nice memories. I look forward to teaching sculpture again at S.V.A.C. this summer. I do so appreciate your support.

  • Well done! It’s fun to see how you reinterpreted your original watercolor in oil, and so interesting to read how you think about the editing process. Brava!

    • Thank you,Evie! It was fun to “visit the past” and think about a reinterpretation going from watercolor to oil. Spring is here and i am currently working in watercolor again. Working in watercolor helps to loosen my style and hopefully it will carry over into my oils. Thank you for your continued support ad love.

  • So lovely! I so appreciate the narration of your process, and being able to go back to the images to see what you did, and why you did it. I wouldn’t have been attuned to all those details otherwise. Really enjoyable. Congratulations on your continued (and deserved) success. I love this post!

  • Hi Max! I am delighted that you enjoyed the latest newsletter. As a writer, you know all so well the importance of editing. I hope you are busy creating! Hope to see you one day soon!

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